R:T to include a problem
N:L to Narrate
The Odd One Out
I’m on the field at school running around and now feeling really hungry. So I decided to head to the cafeteria and get some food. I look at the menu and see some tofu and spring rolls so I decide to have a spring roll to fuel my appetite. After that delicious meal I head to the library to digest and read a book.
I go back on the field and play with my friends for like 10 minutes, because the bell rang. In class I still feel hungry and can’t wait to get home and have some afternoon tea.
Mum and Dad are both home, I ask them what’s for dinner? They said “homemade spring rolls”. “But I already had spring rolls for lunch”.
“I’m not hungry Dad” but I really was hungry. I just didn't want to eat more vegetarian spring rolls. We had spring rolls for dinner 5 days in a row that week. So I decided I'm not going to be a vegetarian anymore.
The next day…
He wakes up and walks into the kitchen to apologise to his Dad and says “I’m sorry for what I said last night about not being a vegetarian and going to starve. I just don’t want to have the same meal over and over, I still want to be a vegetarian. Even if I have the same meal over and over. “It’s okay son there’s I’ll teach you there's more meals to eat then spring rolls'' replied his dad
Nice work Phoenix,
ReplyDeleteI like some of the ideas you included such as having to eat the same food everyday, because I bet that would be very annoying. I also like how you have included paragraphs. I think next time you could improve on introducing your story. For example, the first paragraph could have explained why everyone in the world was vegetarain.